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Wow! finally I find someone that writes pomes like me. For too long I was told pomes that rhymes are not poetry...How wrong they are.
Love your work.
posted by
Christopher_Shannon10
on August 23, 2007 at 1:36 AM
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Oh yeah! Lucky guy that and well written too.
posted by
SpencerStreetStation
on August 15, 2007 at 1:37 AM
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Wow
I don' think I would even want to try and compete with that. You did a great job Angel-I'm not a guy but that would heat up anyone!!!
posted by
spanish_dragon
on August 12, 2007 at 6:31 PM
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Wow, Firehose, indeed, Angel!..:)
Great writing.
posted by
Katray2
on August 12, 2007 at 3:29 PM
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Good strong description!
posted by
Antonionioni
on August 12, 2007 at 2:14 AM
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Re: you might want to edit the last line in the sentences below
thanks twomany...lol....I will definitely re edit!
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 12, 2007 at 12:25 AM
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you might want to edit the last line in the sentences below
I copied and pasted from your blog.Enlarged and BOLD the sentence that might not be what Dale actually did.Say oooopsie.GREAT FUCKIN" WORK THOUGH, DALE IS LUCKY GUY
A low murmur escaped Dale’s lips as Angel traced a tongue across his balls before finally putting them in her mouth and sucking gently. A tongue back up his shaft followed closely by her hand. Angel put the head of his penis in his mouth..
posted by
twomany
on August 12, 2007 at 12:21 AM
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offy
I thought about that, but not every entry on this blog will be that graphic. And besides it's so easy to get into the ma section, you just have to say that you're over 18 and hey presto, they don't check it...
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 10, 2007 at 11:58 PM
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This is very good for erotic writing but it needs to go into MA section of Blogit..Good luck angel. Nice work.
posted by
Offy
on August 10, 2007 at 11:02 PM
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My My My My
After I finish reading this again, I will leave a comment worth leaving. And you were right
about how I would feel about this one....
posted by
twomany
on August 10, 2007 at 10:36 PM
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Firehose, please...
wow...great work, Lady! Solid piece indeed!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 10, 2007 at 11:21 AM
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Better find my little black alien book...
...after that, I'm suddenly compelled to find a "date" for this fine, Friday night. Haven't had "that" with my morning coffee in, um, well.........never! Who needs a bran muffin now? Not, me - interestingly enough, I feel as though I've just eaten breakfast, lunch & dinner
posted by
OneBetty
on August 10, 2007 at 8:23 AM
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angel
posted by
Enigmatic68
on August 9, 2007 at 2:01 AM
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Highly powerful doze . It definitely proves your talent in the field
erotic writing.
posted by
afzal50
on August 8, 2007 at 6:53 PM
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