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Re: Wow
thankyou Nightmajik
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 25, 2007 at 6:07 PM
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Wow
This is some seriously complex and amazing imagery. Great!!
posted by
NightMajik
on August 25, 2007 at 7:19 AM
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Re: Dark
Thankyou troosha!!!!!
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 24, 2007 at 6:06 PM
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Dark
So many wonder (powerful) lines - too many to even pick one or two as my favourties. You just kept spilling them out, one after the other. Great work!!!!
posted by
Troosha
on August 24, 2007 at 2:54 PM
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Re: dave
no worries!!!
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 24, 2007 at 2:02 AM
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I added this piece as a link to my new
Blogit Gold Dust blog. If you don't want it listed there, please let me know. Great piece.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on August 24, 2007 at 1:55 AM
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Re: dave
why thankyou!!!!!!!
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 24, 2007 at 1:33 AM
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Some quite remarkable phrasing in this and juxtaposition creating startling images. Very well done.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on August 24, 2007 at 1:28 AM
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Re: d_m
Ummmm here en
feel better now?
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 24, 2007 at 1:06 AM
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Re: dark_mistress
I'll take that as a compliment. Thankyou for reading TAPS
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 24, 2007 at 1:05 AM
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d_m
posted by
Enigmatic68
on August 24, 2007 at 12:29 AM
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dark_mistress
I never quite know what to say about your writing. You definitely are unique and you draw a vivid picture with your words. In this one, the phrase "puckered love" grabbed me and will not let me go.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 24, 2007 at 12:17 AM
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