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Tattered_Knight
It is good to be ready for anything. Has anything changed in the last thirty years?
posted by
TAPS.
on September 6, 2007 at 9:18 PM
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that was so nice.....you kept all, so you can share with us..
posted by
star4sky5
on September 6, 2007 at 7:48 AM
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You are a drama king, yes? This is thirty years ago....I remember those
drama queen days as well, oh...so thrilled they have passed. A kind reward in age is very little rattles ones' cage.
I presented you with a challenge in a sense (or in making no sense whatsoever) to an early on-set poetry duel of sorts (sir Knight), but have since swore a vow of silence, in a writing sense, until a spiritual enlightenment is unveiled. Until then, I will enjoy you sharing yours.
I know there is a tendency for young people of this age to express their thoughts of mortality. I was hoping in a sense, this piece was produced as such, but then wondered if you had faced death's door and lived to tell. This would be roughly a young man's age to enlist or drive while drinking, either way raising the odds of near missing his demise.
posted by
roadscross
on September 5, 2007 at 11:12 PM
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Such a sad poem. Good but sad.
Roses
from me and Bo =^..^= the wonder dog!
posted by
Whacky
on September 5, 2007 at 11:09 PM
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Re: soul builder
Meaning the poetry was elegant, but hoping the tone was not real!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 5, 2007 at 10:59 PM
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JMO
Thank you!
posted by
Tattered_Knight
on September 5, 2007 at 10:47 PM
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soul builder
I don't know about elegant, but it is poetry
posted by
Tattered_Knight
on September 5, 2007 at 10:47 PM
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RIRI
LOL......Nothing to be alarmed about, as I stated in the other comments, this was written almost thirty years ago
posted by
Tattered_Knight
on September 5, 2007 at 10:46 PM
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Deep... very deep...
posted by
JMO_
on September 5, 2007 at 10:45 PM
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Justi
I think everyone at some point in their life is fascinated with death and dying. I was at one point, this was written almost thirty years ago
posted by
Tattered_Knight
on September 5, 2007 at 10:45 PM
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Sheilah
No dear, or it may have been, I wrote it almost thirty years ago
posted by
Tattered_Knight
on September 5, 2007 at 10:43 PM
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Re: I dont know how to comment on this poem. It's good but I want to scream
proc, that belongs to someone else!!
posted by
Tattered_Knight
on September 5, 2007 at 10:42 PM
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tattered K
Hope it is just elegant poetry!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 5, 2007 at 8:47 PM
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help us to understand!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted by
riri0322
on September 5, 2007 at 8:19 PM
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Tattered Knight
WHAT?
posted by
Justi
on September 5, 2007 at 5:52 PM
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Is this you talking about yourself?!
posted by
Sheilah
on September 5, 2007 at 5:18 PM
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I dont know how to comment on this poem. It's good but I want to scream
'Do not go gently into that good night,Fight,fight against the dying of the light.'
posted by
proc
on September 5, 2007 at 4:05 PM
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