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Very good. Feels metaphorical as well as literal.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on September 17, 2007 at 8:46 AM
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very nice!
I love how you construct several haiku into a complete piece. Each can stand on it's own, which is what makes your work so rich. I like this ode to a passing season.
FYS
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on September 16, 2007 at 8:43 AM
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krisles
Cool
posted by
Tattered_Knight
on September 15, 2007 at 9:17 PM
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Krisles
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 15, 2007 at 9:03 PM
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krisles, you know this early cool snap has got me
Changing seasons. I feel like a new man somehow.
Nice feeling poetry.
posted by
kingmi
on September 15, 2007 at 7:10 PM
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Krisles
you do have the touch
of seventeen syllable
creativity
posted by
Nautikos
on September 15, 2007 at 6:59 PM
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Krisles
now this is indeed about nature
posted by
Lanetay
on September 15, 2007 at 6:56 PM
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krisles
Green is soothing to the eyes and it gives a sense of peace and tranquility.
posted by
richinstore
on September 15, 2007 at 6:39 PM
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K
posted by
Enigmatic68
on September 15, 2007 at 5:56 PM
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Krisles, beautiful work...you really have the hang of this Haiku thing!
posted by
Ariala
on September 15, 2007 at 4:55 PM
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