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Thanks from those of us who aren't "a streak of piss"
posted by
butterflybeebs
on October 11, 2007 at 4:52 PM
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PS White Elephant, 'streak of piss' is not my invention, i's a well known
phrase over here! So I can't stop you using it. Be my guest!
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 6, 2007 at 1:29 PM
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Thanks people for your comments!!
I'm streaking over to post now!
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 6, 2007 at 1:28 PM
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but it's slowly getting to men...
capitalism needs everyone 
Great post!
posted by
pelagus
on October 6, 2007 at 12:10 PM
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Antonio
Applauds all round. Great post
Bless
posted by
UncharteredSoul
on October 6, 2007 at 9:01 AM
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Well Done! Moon
posted by
magic_moon
on October 6, 2007 at 8:24 AM
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I just love the wit!
perfectly funny, sarcastic, witty and true... and oh a lovely sonnet too!
posted by
nemonemo
on October 6, 2007 at 6:15 AM
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Nicely done. AmMused
posted by
AmMused
on October 6, 2007 at 5:31 AM
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That's absolutely excellent Tony! Hope those who might need to-read!
posted by
Scramble
on October 6, 2007 at 3:24 AM
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lovely poem ...i do not have that problem ..thanks god
posted by
drohan254
on October 6, 2007 at 2:38 AM
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Antonionioni
If you don't mind, I'll be using the "
streak of piss" remark myself! I loved that line

... hey, did you see those 2 streak of piss over there?

... sadly, I don't think it will reduce the males' fascination with them though! but good try onionioni anyway - now all you have to do is to convince some 1 billion men who just
love those "size zero models"

.... good luck!
posted by
White_Elephant
on October 6, 2007 at 1:07 AM
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Thanks everyone - and have a nice weekend.
I'll be posting later on after I come back from my day out.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 6, 2007 at 12:58 AM
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Then why is there such a pressure to look like a drink of water, streak of piss ....gone! ..the imagery is so painting-like. Good job. Imagine the horrid rattle of two skeletal women dancing on a tin roof
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 5, 2007 at 10:59 PM
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Antonio
i'd love to hug a bag of flesh rather than a bag of bones!
posted by
richinstore
on October 5, 2007 at 8:38 PM
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Tony -
I've always been interested in shapeshifters - but not these kind!
posted by
sannhet
on October 5, 2007 at 5:17 PM
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posted by
Matie
on October 5, 2007 at 4:10 PM
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You're welcome FYS!!!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 5, 2007 at 2:22 PM
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I love this!
thanks for posting it!!!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 5, 2007 at 12:13 PM
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Hee hee - glad you agree!
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 5, 2007 at 10:33 AM
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I with you I like a little something to hold when I wrap my arms around a woman / spinner
posted by
spinner
on October 5, 2007 at 10:33 AM
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Antonionio
Bravo

A daily struggle for those of us who live in a well insulated shell

!
posted by
OneBetty
on October 5, 2007 at 10:25 AM
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