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Excellent and thought evoking, Tony!
Sadly, more wars for oil and money appear to be in the offing (Iran and possibly Syria while they're at it - twofer deal, I suppose..
)..so I'd say the last two lines sum up our condition..
posted by
Katray2
on October 10, 2007 at 10:48 AM
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Ahem! Time to move on!
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 10, 2007 at 10:37 AM
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posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 10, 2007 at 9:52 AM
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anotnionioni
Wonderful!! Yes, overindulgence
posted by
Tattered_Knight
on October 10, 2007 at 8:37 AM
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Good one :)
I really like the poem itself and the way you've laid it out with the colours and the photo
posted by
opheliablue
on October 10, 2007 at 8:33 AM
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Nice and encouraging!
Visit my blog and read poems.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on October 10, 2007 at 6:52 AM
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There are those that say we cannot take more than our share from the
planet; unfortunately there are also those who worship greed and will destroy everything beautiful if we allow it. Excellent subject; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on October 10, 2007 at 5:20 AM
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Hi everyone - thanks! (PS: It's a golden road in the pic.)
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 10, 2007 at 12:24 AM
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brilliant!
excellent stuff ... I think the light at the end of the tunnel is dimming for planet earth
posted by
White_Elephant
on October 9, 2007 at 11:37 PM
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, Very good!
Ps. I wanted to thank you here for responding to my writings. It really meant a lot. So, Thank you! I'll keep looking in on ya.
Mini
posted by
minik
on October 9, 2007 at 11:01 PM
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Antonionionionionionio...
(stop me before I type again) - less greed, more love? Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on October 9, 2007 at 7:34 PM
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antoini
what's the pic?
posted by
richinstore
on October 9, 2007 at 7:26 PM
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Antonio
this is getting scarier each day... but still I prefer to dream on...
posted by
Sheilah
on October 9, 2007 at 5:45 PM
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I would like to think there's hope
posted by
Matie
on October 9, 2007 at 5:41 PM
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Hi everyone - thanks for going up the yellow gold brick road with me...
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 9, 2007 at 3:51 PM
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posted by
Amanda__
on October 9, 2007 at 2:45 PM
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Antonionioni
You've really done a job on this one--its wonderful and rather frightening all at the same time. I'm afraid that at the end of that yellow brick road is a little old man that cannot help us at all, to get back to the good life.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 9, 2007 at 1:30 PM
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For me--that's a brilliant piece Tony!
posted by
Scramble
on October 9, 2007 at 1:16 PM
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WOW,WOW,WOW,WOW!
Thanks, I have a new outlook on sonnets! #400 , I can't wait for 401!SAM
posted by
sam444
on October 9, 2007 at 12:05 PM
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Ack ackack. Ack ack ack ackack ack!
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 9, 2007 at 11:36 AM
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Can we? AmMused
posted by
AmMused
on October 9, 2007 at 11:01 AM
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