Comments on yet another two haiku poems....

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Re: Kayzzaman
kazzy, man (how about telling us your name, and a few (only a few) vital stats.  Haiku is three lines.  There are certain rules and guidelines, many good haiku collections, with translations of classic Japanese pieces have the above.  Do not bend language to suit rules etc. (it's stupid). Max (Mark)

posted by maxcohen on October 17, 2007 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman
Thank you for your comments.
Is Haiku of 3 lines or seven lines? Will you tell me?
Happy writing.

posted by Kayzzaman on October 17, 2007 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

thankyou, thankyou!

posted by maxcohen on October 17, 2007 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

Max
  to both...

posted by Troosha on October 17, 2007 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply