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Thanks everyone!
posted by
heartworms
on October 23, 2007 at 12:31 PM
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Very nice.....
posted by
robertwest
on October 23, 2007 at 1:19 AM
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Good work
I like your style.
posted by
butterflybeebs
on October 22, 2007 at 6:46 AM
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That's very well done! Yes-you ARE real and so am I real! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on October 22, 2007 at 3:09 AM
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Nicely written
It has a lot of emotion, and I love the way it flows
posted by
NightMajik
on October 22, 2007 at 12:54 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on October 21, 2007 at 11:08 PM
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I love this poem, I can relate to it more than you could imagine. Thank you.
posted by
Trene
on October 21, 2007 at 10:51 PM
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I really like that
growth from pain and people being real. Yeah I wish I couldn't relate to that.
posted by
myshadowle
on October 21, 2007 at 10:25 PM
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Yes.....
Yes you are real..... just look at the panaramic view around you......... smile..... because you should..... it looks better on you i am sure of it.....
posted by
whiteknight3128
on October 21, 2007 at 9:14 PM
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Re: If hpoe so,when the right person considers me special as I do,maybe
I just think I deserve better than what I'm getting in return thus far in my life? And my daughter too!
posted by
heartworms
on October 21, 2007 at 8:53 PM
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heartworms
posted by
jacentaOld
on October 21, 2007 at 8:49 PM
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does the pain ever stop
posted by
Lanetay
on October 21, 2007 at 8:43 PM
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Pain comes in so many forms but one thing for sure,it hurts.
katzs. Well written.
posted by
katzs
on October 21, 2007 at 8:34 PM
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