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Go right ahead my dear, I hope it eases their pain.
I know what it's like to lose a pre-term baby, I just wish I could do more to ease their grief.
Be blessed.
Dinka
posted by
Dinka
on November 1, 2007 at 3:51 AM
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Thank you
Thank you so much that was beautiful. Would you mind if I gave this poem to my nephew and niece?
posted by
minik
on October 31, 2007 at 10:03 PM
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Patience my love, patience
We tried so long to put a mark on our love
To find a place to touch, a place to hold
Patience my love, patience
One month along, I'm sick, I'm sore, I hurt.
Three months along, my tummy feels a bump
Three months to go. A little girl. She moves!
and soon our Little Love we'll have and hold
Patience my love, patience.
Heaven has lost an angel.
Two months more, she's ours,
but heaven wants her back.
We'll see her again, if we can just have
patience my love, patience.
posted by
Dinka
on October 26, 2007 at 6:31 AM
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Minik, I am really pained and saddened to hear of the mishap
Times such as these words don't much help, but you a try this idea
There are moments in life when we miss someone.
So much that we just want to pluck them from
our dreams and hug them for real.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 25, 2007 at 10:46 AM
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That's a tough one.
I think you need to just say what you feel, pour it all out - like a stream of consciousness - then search inside it to identify what you're happy to give them and to shape it. I don't think there's much we can offer from the outside.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 25, 2007 at 10:32 AM
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mini, my prayers too you.......
posted by
star4sky5
on October 24, 2007 at 6:44 AM
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My heart pours for you and your family. I lost my daughter when I was 8 months pg, and my heart aches for her every day, so I know the sorrow you are experiencing and that which will come.
I don't know if I can give any words to help write your piece. Just know that comfort can come from places you would least expect it . . . and all you have to get through is the moment your in. Time does not heal wounds, it just gets us from one point to the next. Sadly we cannot become the people we are without the stuff we deal with in between.
You are in my prayers.
posted by
flappergirl
on October 23, 2007 at 8:49 PM
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