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keep writing this is lovely poetry well done
posted by
Kabu
on October 29, 2007 at 2:04 AM
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very nice/.....
posted by
star4sky5
on October 28, 2007 at 10:43 PM
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Good post with wonderful words.

katzs
posted by
katzs
on October 28, 2007 at 10:40 PM
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Hello there
Fine post.
Lou
posted by
Cameraeye
on October 28, 2007 at 10:08 PM
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Kayzzaman
Really good supplication! Hope you're heard!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 28, 2007 at 7:18 PM
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one of those "O" poem. nice piece. i really like it.
thank for your comment.
posted by
draco101
on October 28, 2007 at 6:08 PM
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Kayzz
Gave me chills. Bravo!
Julie
posted by
Jokester
on October 28, 2007 at 1:57 PM
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great work, Kayzzaman!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 28, 2007 at 11:35 AM
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Bravo! This is chilling; asking for a taste of death in life;
"Give us a chance to feel the chill of death before life" 'tis the epitome of life.
posted by
roadscross
on October 28, 2007 at 11:15 AM
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to the poetry
Well .. you definitely got the real .. I mean I commented nicely on many others that I feel like what ever I say about your poems would be degrading to your work .. thankful for the works of art you provide .. keep it up .. by the way .. I’m new around here.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on October 28, 2007 at 7:54 AM
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WEll said ! It's Profound !
posted by
afzal50
on October 28, 2007 at 6:24 AM
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Good poem of prayer & praise.
posted by
A-and-B
on October 28, 2007 at 6:13 AM
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kayz
posted by
richinstore
on October 28, 2007 at 5:20 AM
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