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THX my peeps
thx katz, dave, afzal, 7, fys.
sb1-i think we are all influenced much more profoundly by our respective cultures than we realize.
rich-i always try to make my 1st line(s) stand out. My 1st line is usually my initial inspiration.
NM-thank ya bay baay.
posted by
Sudanym_
on October 30, 2007 at 3:44 PM
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very vivid
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 30, 2007 at 9:18 AM
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pat.........
posted by
star4sky5
on October 29, 2007 at 9:59 PM
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Dream is the essence of this life .
posted by
afzal50
on October 29, 2007 at 9:16 PM
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Dreams--
--can inspire a lot of thought, can't they? And poetry, too! I've also written poetry because of dreams.
Great work!
posted by
NightMajik
on October 29, 2007 at 8:15 PM
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patmanplus
I love your first stanza.
posted by
richinstore
on October 29, 2007 at 7:45 PM
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A dreamy one, Pat.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 29, 2007 at 7:07 PM
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i believe so...
what to do.
posted by
Sudanym_
on October 29, 2007 at 7:00 PM
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Patmanplus
Row row row your boat, gently down the stream, life is but a dream! IT WAS ALL PROGRAMMING!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 29, 2007 at 6:56 PM
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We can say anything we want to.
That doesn't make it true.
posted by
Sudanym_
on October 29, 2007 at 6:46 PM
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We can change our dreams if we want to.
katzs
posted by
katzs
on October 29, 2007 at 6:10 PM
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