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Your last stanza sums it all up.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on October 31, 2007 at 11:49 AM
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thanks you guys, i value the responses
posted by
chrisja
on October 30, 2007 at 3:18 PM
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Through your poem, you have brought home the points.
katzs
posted by
katzs
on October 30, 2007 at 9:16 AM
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Passionate and powerful !
posted by
afzal50
on October 30, 2007 at 7:22 AM
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chrisja
I hate war...Long Live Peace!
posted by
richinstore
on October 30, 2007 at 6:33 AM
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Strong stuff. Nice structure too.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 30, 2007 at 6:17 AM
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vivid imagry
well done.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 30, 2007 at 6:06 AM
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