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Thx Dudes and Dudette
max, i get drunk every nite and i was wasted, i forgot i wrote that one, i meant to save it for another day cause i liked the one before a real lot. i usually do edit a lot. i forgot to write improv on that one, gotta do it now. That one was ultra-improv. The silly nilly from hell.
posted by
Sudanym_
on October 31, 2007 at 10:28 AM
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posted by
maxcohen
on October 31, 2007 at 12:13 AM
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I have to be Frank, I never really read your blog (properly) only today did I go into your writing. I have added remarks to previous pieces as well. By the way I thought you were a woman for some reason, then I saw you are a dude. Do people really use the word "dude" in conversation?! Bye Max (Pax) Cohen
posted by
maxcohen
on October 31, 2007 at 12:12 AM
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I like these lines very much, very imaginative:
if i was a cartoon character,
i would be...
Slap happy pappy.
Slap happy pappy.
I get a feeling sometimes while reading your pieces that you are "saying": 'Look, I don't really have time or patience for all this "proper" poetry, so I'll send along whatever comes etc.' I have a strong feeling that if you sat down for five minutes and "worked" on the pieces in your head or on paper etc. you'll be surprised where you'll get to. You have a lot of energy - USE IT! Max C.
posted by
maxcohen
on October 30, 2007 at 11:54 PM
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STRONG PIECE, though!!! Max c.
posted by
maxcohen
on October 30, 2007 at 11:44 PM
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Nice and well said !
posted by
afzal50
on October 30, 2007 at 10:23 PM
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WELCOME TO PARADISE
posted by
star4sky5
on October 30, 2007 at 10:11 PM
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patmanplus
I really don't know about Hell.
posted by
richinstore
on October 30, 2007 at 8:30 PM
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patmanplus
Strange poetry! Made me chuckle though!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 30, 2007 at 7:42 PM
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