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May your dark times fade forever

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on November 6, 2007 at 5:48 PM | link to this | reply

It's good by itself but also because it reminds me that I, too, have
thoughts in between the lines of this prayer -- perhaps every time I hear this prayer....

posted by WindTapper on November 6, 2007 at 1:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Very Nice!!!
starfire, thanks, glad I could help you reflect.

posted by flappergirl on November 6, 2007 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: flappergirl
richinstore, thanks for always dropping by.

posted by flappergirl on November 6, 2007 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

afzal
thanks!

posted by flappergirl on November 6, 2007 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

FineYoungSinger
Exactly. Thanks.

posted by flappergirl on November 6, 2007 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

Great prayer !

posted by afzal50 on November 6, 2007 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

I love what you did with The Lord's Prayer here.
"Judging them, when I've not yet been judged": the standout phrase...how many are guilty of exactly this?  Well done, and thank you for reminding all of us the difference between vein repitition and true prayer.

posted by FineYoungSinger on November 6, 2007 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply

flappergirl
I love this prayer. I remembered singing this song when I was in the Church Choir.

posted by richinstore on November 6, 2007 at 6:47 AM | link to this | reply

Very Nice!!!
  It says a LOT!  I really liked that, it makes me reflect too.    Best Wishes

posted by starfire99 on November 6, 2007 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply