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Decshak
Ah you're right...I guess in my head "cosmos" is plural...
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Jokester
on November 8, 2007 at 1:12 PM
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richinstore
Ah...another rose for my vase! ty!
posted by
Jokester
on November 8, 2007 at 1:11 PM
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Katzs
Thanks!
posted by
Jokester
on November 8, 2007 at 1:10 PM
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"A cry to the cosmos" and "it was telling them" are out of sync. Cosmos and
them need to be the same number of things, grammatically. Otherwise, this is fine....
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WindTapper
on November 8, 2007 at 2:21 AM
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jokester
posted by
richinstore
on November 7, 2007 at 8:44 PM
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well written.
katzs
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katzs
on November 7, 2007 at 4:07 PM
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