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thank u for the rose 7stars - i appreciate it very much
posted by
chrisja
on November 12, 2007 at 1:39 PM
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posted by
star4sky5
on November 12, 2007 at 1:24 PM
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Re: Such an excellent poem, chrisja.
thank you saul_relative, i appreciate your response
posted by
chrisja
on November 12, 2007 at 1:21 PM
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Re: Re: wow afzal that was fast - i'm still fiddling with it - i don't know whether
now that's an interesting concept skinnyb - multichoice endings for poems, i like it - it's do-able - although jesus coming out of the suspended smoke seems like a nice metaphor for inspiration - so the third choice is choosing both - thanks for visiting
posted by
chrisja
on November 12, 2007 at 1:20 PM
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Re: Excellent...
thank u teddypoet, this is high praise from one so prolific as yourself, i appreciate it
posted by
chrisja
on November 12, 2007 at 1:16 PM
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Re: Nice feelings to enjoy
thank u kayzzman - i'm glad you like the feelings of this one
posted by
chrisja
on November 12, 2007 at 1:15 PM
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and you whiteknight - thank you for visiting
posted by
chrisja
on November 12, 2007 at 1:14 PM
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thank you for stopping by richie, i appreciate it
posted by
chrisja
on November 12, 2007 at 1:14 PM
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Such an excellent poem, chrisja.
posted by
saul_relative
on November 12, 2007 at 1:01 PM
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Re: wow afzal that was fast - i'm still fiddling with it - i don't know whether
that affie is sure quick on a rose................. 
Are the last two lines multiple choice - like pick which one you like the best?
Vry nice.
posted by
justanotherskinnybitch
on November 12, 2007 at 10:48 AM
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Excellent...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 12, 2007 at 7:56 AM
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Nice feelings to enjoy
posted by
Kayzzaman
on November 11, 2007 at 9:33 PM
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hmmmm
have a good day... keep smiling....
posted by
whiteknight3128
on November 11, 2007 at 6:45 PM
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chrisja
thanks for sharing
posted by
richinstore
on November 11, 2007 at 6:19 PM
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wow afzal that was fast - i'm still fiddling with it - i don't know whether
to call it 'spirit song' or 'jesus reclining' - wnat do you think?
posted by
chrisja
on November 11, 2007 at 5:53 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on November 11, 2007 at 5:51 PM
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