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lol Which poem?
Hey which poem where you talking about because there were 2 poems on the page hehe...or are you talking bout both poems? Trish
posted by
Poetry_Within_My_Soul
on November 21, 2007 at 9:21 AM
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lol
thanks im really happy you enjoyed the poem. i hope i can keep writing more you like to read ...
posted by
Poetry_Within_My_Soul
on November 21, 2007 at 1:38 AM
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Found the poem lol
You have to read Noway Out because its like as we were writing it we where reading eachothers mind lol it just we used different words that kinda mean the same....its awesome to know there are others out there that have the same sence of meaning when people tell you i use my heart mind n most of all my inner soul and put everything into my work its just awesome to know you and some others know where im comeing from...you ever get to write something where just one 1 thing triggers thoughts into ur brain n it all just comes out of ur fingers to the paper n just flows smoothly with no writers block...i love those days/nights hehe.
Trish aka Shorty
posted by
Poetry_Within_My_Soul
on November 21, 2007 at 1:19 AM
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Wow! Very expressive
I really enjoyed reading your work. Very intense and emotional . Awesomely put together
posted by
akaWildfire
on November 20, 2007 at 8:40 AM
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This poem reminds me of one of mine
Wow! all i keep thinking is wow it sounds like my one poem but writting in different words lol..what r the odds of that...Awesome job! keep up the great work...i loved it
posted by
Poetry_Within_My_Soul
on November 19, 2007 at 11:44 PM
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Ty
It's very sad when we find ourselves in a situation when we can't seem to "let go". We seem to lose all sense of pride. Emotions expressed in your poem felt raw and real...
posted by
Troosha
on November 19, 2007 at 12:08 PM
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Great poetry. Excellent timing and rhythm. Very lyrical and emotive, and very well-written.
posted by
BuddhaDemon
on November 19, 2007 at 9:12 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on November 18, 2007 at 5:31 PM
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wow .. its like a moment i was into a minute before i read your poem
posted by
Angesom_AG
on November 18, 2007 at 7:33 AM
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Tyleness
posted by
richinstore
on November 18, 2007 at 7:07 AM
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