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dude.........
your only 6    teen how the hell are you already in love, man enjoy life before love. cuz once your in love thats it. play soccer and do sixteen year old stuff and leave the love to the old people. but keep writing cuz you definitely have a gift.

posted by sneakermzp on December 1, 2007 at 10:43 AM | link to this | reply

Nice job, young fellow!
Keep up the good work.

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on November 30, 2007 at 12:49 PM | link to this | reply

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Well done!  joab

posted by joab1 on November 28, 2007 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

very lovely...makes me think of my neice
whose name is Lexi.   Beautiful

posted by FineYoungSinger on November 27, 2007 at 12:15 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for reading, keep writing.

Max

posted by contagion_publishing on November 27, 2007 at 2:09 AM | link to this | reply

SO WELL SAID

posted by star4sky5 on November 26, 2007 at 7:30 PM | link to this | reply

Light in the Dark
excellent

posted by richinstore on November 26, 2007 at 2:28 AM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on November 25, 2007 at 4:50 PM | link to this | reply

posted by star4sky5 on November 25, 2007 at 11:21 AM | link to this | reply

Keep it up!

posted by Kayzzaman on November 25, 2007 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

good work my friend keep up the good work

posted by spinner on November 25, 2007 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply