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Outstanding, explosive, powerful....an interspective, then a climax
leading to a gentle exit. I'm impressed, greatly impressed! Brilliant piece!
posted by
Layna_Ann
on December 22, 2007 at 5:06 PM
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Beautiful!!! That's it. When I'm at a loss for words, I'll head to a pool and dive in.
Thanks!
posted by
mama_joy
on December 13, 2007 at 4:11 AM
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awesome
posted by
spinner
on December 5, 2007 at 9:48 AM
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Very good.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 5, 2007 at 8:59 AM
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posted by
FineYoungSinger
on December 5, 2007 at 7:47 AM
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Very nice!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on December 5, 2007 at 4:49 AM
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