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Kayzza
It did appear a highly spiritual poem to me. The use of alliteration has served to highten the effect. Vey nice!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 5, 2007 at 5:55 PM
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K
Nicely worded. Very Shakesperian.
posted by
avant-garde
on December 5, 2007 at 2:38 PM
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Kayzz
Stunning expression of emotions.....
posted by
Troosha
on December 5, 2007 at 10:33 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on December 5, 2007 at 10:31 AM
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Kayzz
You put thoughts and emotions into words in such a way, they breathe life. Well done. Take care.
Blessings
posted by
UncharteredSoul
on December 5, 2007 at 10:23 AM
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Beautiful expression of love!
posted by
BrightIrish
on December 5, 2007 at 10:22 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on December 5, 2007 at 10:20 AM
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I love the last stanza!
How many times I wonder this of the one for whom I constanly wonder.
posted by
flappergirl
on December 5, 2007 at 9:56 AM
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I will swim across the oceanic fire to reach for thee..
such a vivid description..well-done !
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 5, 2007 at 9:12 AM
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posted by
Offy
on December 5, 2007 at 8:55 AM
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Kayzzaman, such a fine, personal poem.
joab
posted by
joab1
on December 5, 2007 at 8:12 AM
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great love poem
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on December 5, 2007 at 7:44 AM
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OK. I was here.
posted by
WindTapper
on December 5, 2007 at 6:51 AM
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perfect.
posted by
star4sky5
on December 5, 2007 at 5:31 AM
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perfect......
posted by
star4sky5
on December 5, 2007 at 5:30 AM
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