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Ole!
Very cinematic presentation.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on February 16, 2008 at 12:35 PM
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Ambitious, jfm. Well done...
posted by
saul_relative
on December 9, 2007 at 9:48 AM
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Deep and mysterious, beautiful images, the dance as a metaohor. Great! Harpo47
posted by
Harpo47
on December 8, 2007 at 12:42 AM
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absolutely beaitiful
posted by
star4sky5
on December 6, 2007 at 12:58 PM
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jfm
There almost too many wonderful lines to choose from but this verse stood out for me"
The sky had lost its mooring and
the clouds had floated out to sea
The silver thread had vanished
and the door to the Sun could not be seen
Your creativity and vibrant imagination shines through on this piece. Bravo! 
posted by
Troosha
on December 6, 2007 at 8:48 AM
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Great metaphors. The last two lines underscores the value of time.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 6, 2007 at 7:50 AM
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Truely a masterpiece
posted by
slinkycruiser
on December 5, 2007 at 7:34 PM
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that was amazing.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on December 5, 2007 at 5:59 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on December 5, 2007 at 5:32 PM
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