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posted by
NightMajik
on December 16, 2007 at 3:24 AM
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Ex Turpi
posted by
richinstore
on December 15, 2007 at 8:21 AM
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HE
Very nice! I like the way you wrote the poem!
posted by
Oosthuizen
on December 15, 2007 at 12:21 AM
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ex
very nice, now this kind of poetry I understand
posted by
Lanetay
on December 14, 2007 at 10:59 AM
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Ex T, if I were to fill in the gap between Ex and T, it would be 'cellen'
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 14, 2007 at 5:41 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on December 13, 2007 at 8:48 AM
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very nice
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on December 13, 2007 at 8:36 AM
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Nicely rhymy and christmasy
posted by
Straightforward
on December 13, 2007 at 5:57 AM
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posted by
Dee2206
on December 13, 2007 at 4:00 AM
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Nicely put ex........
thanks for sharing & for the reminder what Christmas is really about..
posted by
mariaki
on December 13, 2007 at 2:29 AM
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I DON'T LIKE YOUR POEM
Because I don't like being told what to do! Now do you want to preach, or do you want to write poetry--hey there are the psalms, have you ever looked at them and how they're written? First of all, these are written from the inside (Songs of Solomon). Your poem is didactic, brittle, and,shallow--namely because it doesn't have an inner thought to carry it.
If you wamt to be a poet, you have to wake up to god everyday. This is not an easy notion to partake in goddneess, and if you are going to write about it, at least get the story straight.
To sum up: the very restraints of our language is our freedom, and while there is no visual, we always know when we touch and nudge shoulders.
posted by
jfm32
on December 12, 2007 at 11:03 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on December 12, 2007 at 5:06 PM
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Very nice, ET !
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 12, 2007 at 4:56 PM
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