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very nicely done

I hope this Christmas finds you surrounded by the ones you love .

Myself I'm flying solo tonight. My kids are skiing for a week with their mom.

So i will probably will write a lot tonight.hopefully with good spirit and with  love for fellow mankind how it comes out is another story.

May the good lord watch over you and the ones you love in the coming year.

Merry Xmas and have the very best new year you can

twomany aka Stephen

posted by twomany on December 24, 2007 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

One of your best. Happy Holidays.

posted by EX_TURPI on December 24, 2007 at 6:50 AM | link to this | reply

Hang in there, and go with the flow..no one can tell the future - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on December 23, 2007 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

Very poetic

posted by Kayzzaman on December 23, 2007 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

broken

good poem nice rhyme you've got it together!

 

posted by dmd423 on December 22, 2007 at 10:36 PM | link to this | reply

The tossing and turning of a relationship. sam

posted by sam444 on December 22, 2007 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply