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Good work by TAPS, I think!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 26, 2007 at 9:27 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on December 26, 2007 at 5:48 PM
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Clever..I liked TAP's version !
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 26, 2007 at 5:48 PM
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That works too! Only with the last line, I had "cart" and all the rest with the "r" in.
posted by
cpklapper
on December 26, 2007 at 5:45 PM
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O could I play such a simple pa't
That with many a Cupid's da't
To make my mark upon your hea't
With aim not of an old fa't
But with truer one of life's sta't
Set my life's course with that cha't
Wit h you on my deck, I'd look sma't
E'en if I were but a captain of a yacht
posted by
TAPS.
on December 26, 2007 at 4:58 PM
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cp
I had fun with this... did it a few times (went from the logical, to the romantic, to the ridiculous). Thanks for the laugh!
posted by
Troosha
on December 26, 2007 at 2:46 PM
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Yes,it's fun to meet bloggers who are creative, or who use variety.TakeCare
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on December 26, 2007 at 2:31 PM
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Re: Are we allowed to draw a blank with this BLANK VERSE post? Of course, s
A little holiday puzzle, like the puzzle I would get in my stocking for Christmas when I was young.
Glad that you enjoyed it!
Shalom!
posted by
cpklapper
on December 26, 2007 at 2:16 PM
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Are we allowed to draw a blank with this BLANK VERSE post? Of course, some
rhymes are obvious, more were not for me. Yet, I found this post refreshing and fun. Thanks and enjoy the HOLIDAYS! Shalom from Neil (Yin) and Nelly Maydi-Daydi (Yang)
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on December 26, 2007 at 2:04 PM
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