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Your so right. I try to avoid the violence on television by surfing,
but now the commercials stunt us just as the show does. Too much
blood. Too much hate. I wish we could all love each other.
posted by
Winged
on May 25, 2008 at 4:47 PM
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Re:
Thank you for checking it out. I thought that I had the feeling down pretty well but wanted the opinion on it of someone that has lived there and actually knew first hand if I had it right or not. Thanks again!
Damon
posted by
Damond
on February 26, 2008 at 1:19 AM
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Thank you for directing me on this poem, which I somehow missed. It's very descriptive. Says in few words, what many whole page news articles, doesn't.
posted by
AlienFemale
on February 24, 2008 at 1:07 PM
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Re: Hi
Thank you! Thanks also for reading.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on February 22, 2008 at 9:21 PM
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Hi
amazing amazing piece
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 22, 2008 at 11:08 AM
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Re: Damon
Thanks Justi, I don't like the reason for the content either. I do think, though, that it needed to be written.
Thanks again!
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 23, 2008 at 10:42 AM
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Damon
It is so sad what is happening all over our world. I like your poetry. I don't like the reason for the content but it is done very well.
posted by
Justi
on January 23, 2008 at 9:38 AM
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Re: churches burning
Thank you! I appreciate your kind comment on Violence.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 22, 2008 at 4:19 PM
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churches burning
this poem rivals some of my worst nightmares! Impressive that you creat such vivid images in relatively few words.
posted by
kmer
on January 22, 2008 at 3:26 PM
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Re: sad and true.
Thank you for commenting on this piece Katherine Ann.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 22, 2008 at 12:58 PM
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sad and true.
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on January 21, 2008 at 5:14 PM
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Re: scary stuff this but so well put together.
Kabu, thanks so much for commenting on Violence.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 21, 2008 at 8:00 AM
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Re: Mindless violence that we need to combat not with violence but with
Straightforward I do agree with what you say, and that we need to combat it in every way that we can. Thanks for commenting.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 21, 2008 at 7:59 AM
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scary stuff this but so well put together.
posted by
Kabu
on January 20, 2008 at 10:54 PM
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Mindless violence that we need to combat not with violence but with
exposing what this violence is all about and analysing it at its roots. What say?
posted by
Straightforward
on January 20, 2008 at 6:36 AM
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Re: this is very graphic writing, one could believe you were standing there
Thank you so much. I appreciate all the positive feedback that I have gotten on this one.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 18, 2008 at 3:16 PM
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this is very graphic writing, one could believe you were standing there
seeing for yourself the misery of war torn countries. Well done.
posted by
Kabu
on January 17, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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Re:
Thanks for commenting. It is only my opinion as to what it would be like to live in those third world countries.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 16, 2008 at 11:36 PM
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very graphic descriptions
posted by
leaderspeaker
on January 16, 2008 at 7:35 PM
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Re: I trust this is not as real as it reads.............
Hi Mariaki,
No itsn't real for me at all, but I suspect for a lot of people it probably is. Thanks so much for your kind comment.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 14, 2008 at 1:53 PM
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Re:
No I was only thinking about what it must be like for a lot of families to live in some of the third world countries. I am glad that the thoughts came through so well you felt that I might have been there and had the experience.
Thanks so much for your kind comment on this one.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 14, 2008 at 1:51 PM
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I trust this is not as real as it reads.............
very well done; thank you for sharing
posted by
mariaki
on January 14, 2008 at 6:51 AM
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Did you have that experience? You express the sentiments well, regardless.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on January 14, 2008 at 6:01 AM
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Re: rather heavy....
Thank you! I suppose that you must have sseen the one reply I made by what you said in your comment. I hope that it wasn't extremely painful and that you got over it okay. Thanks again for commenting.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 13, 2008 at 11:02 PM
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rather heavy....
i felt my heart shrinking while i was reading dear..i've been in one of those horrible plights...i know how it sure hurts...
deeply expressed dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on January 13, 2008 at 10:47 PM
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Re: Wow!
I was thinking that that this might be what it would be like to live in one of the Third World Countries when I wrote it. It is diefinitely a different type of write for me.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 13, 2008 at 10:00 PM
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Re: Well said !
Thank you Afzal.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on January 13, 2008 at 9:53 PM
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Well said !
posted by
afzal50
on January 13, 2008 at 9:42 PM
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Wow!
I don't know what to say! Very emotional piece.
posted by
CRShelley
on January 13, 2008 at 9:32 PM
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