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Wow! You come through loud and clear; with resonance even.
Look at how many people are feeling you and supporting you for giving of this piece. If this is a matter of your heart, what you are feeling is residual of the past, focus on what you want, not what you don't want. It will be what you make it; but in the meantime, stay safe and protected.
posted by
KingKai
on January 17, 2008 at 8:55 AM
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Prison is not good!!!!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 16, 2008 at 9:45 PM
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Extraordinary thoughts and ambiance in this well written lament. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 16, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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Tyle
Wow, have I ever felt this way...some days I still do. Wonderful prose
Thanks for sharing.
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on January 16, 2008 at 4:43 PM
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This Life is all you have, Lady...damn the walls- Love out loud!
Excellent piece, by the way....
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 16, 2008 at 4:38 PM
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Passionate and powerful !
posted by
afzal50
on January 16, 2008 at 4:27 PM
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Very Good Poem!
This is what the world has become. Everything is so PC. It started with used cars, ya' know. They became pre-owned and everything went to hell in a handbag. Great job!!
posted by
CRShelley
on January 16, 2008 at 4:00 PM
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Ty, that is so full of expression...
Hope it's only a poem though, otherwise, you need to start getting on with your life,young lady ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 16, 2008 at 3:54 PM
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maybe you should lead, great job
posted by
spinner
on January 16, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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BRAVO
as someone who has felt almost xactly that same way i couldnt have written or described it better its truly an amazing poem great job a+++ in my book
posted by
quietguy7
on January 16, 2008 at 3:04 PM
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