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How very true. To many of us wander through life blindly.
posted by
Troosha
on January 19, 2008 at 8:10 AM
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Excellent point
Thanks for sharing! Simple and well-written.
posted by
NightMajik
on January 19, 2008 at 5:09 AM
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Some days Nature takes r breath away;Others need us to focus on breath&pray
...meditate on the breathing...inhale...exhale....notice the rhythm...slow it down, HLD....exhale slowly, real slow.... CLOSE YOUR EYES if the world is not beautiful today. Somedays the real world comes with CLOSED eyes. Shalom Dear Friend. LaydiDEonils
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on January 19, 2008 at 2:23 AM
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yes
posted by
lestate7
on January 19, 2008 at 1:11 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on January 18, 2008 at 10:48 PM
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You got that right, QG, finally :) - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 18, 2008 at 7:55 PM
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The only reason you are a poet is becuase you can't spell
intersesting the ommision of a constantant (twice, which makes it intentional, and colloquial)--oh my! Do we have a poet on our hands?
Or does someone only write once, never to proceed to the great foliage
of the subjunctive mood
"What's that?"
"Damn if I know, and I'm not even a playwright."
posted by
jfm32
on January 18, 2008 at 6:10 PM
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posted by
pen_dragon
on January 18, 2008 at 6:03 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on January 18, 2008 at 5:12 PM
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a kindred spirit
Hi, bashful guy! I love your poems. Not only because i, too, write poems very similar in content and form as yours...a kindred spirit, if you will please agree and accept, when you read my own poems...but also because...they are very real. It makes me feel as if i'm with you, while you are experiencing all the emotions in your poems. Keep on writing what you feel...express them and i, for one, am with you...it's great to write about something that touches you deeply, right?!!!...even if it's about your misery, pain and depression. After all, these are all facets of LIFE. We need to feel these emotions...so, we will know that we are truly alive. I also love it when you get spiritual...i mean, when you mention GOD...coz for me, He, too, uplifts me...when life becomes difficult and mean. Way to go, kindred spirit!
posted by
wana_phils
on January 18, 2008 at 4:07 PM
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Amen! Good advice for me as well. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 18, 2008 at 2:55 PM
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