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It shouldnt be so difficult to decide to be part of the sollution and not the problem, good work taking the dynamic apart...

posted by pen_dragon on January 22, 2008 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

amazing
this is very good!

posted by flappergirl on January 22, 2008 at 7:17 AM | link to this | reply

well said, quietguy...

posted by saul_relative on January 22, 2008 at 2:06 AM | link to this | reply

Nice

posted by SeshuWho on January 21, 2008 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

VERY NICELY DONE

and the mind and learning to love yourself is an art

and discovering that being content with self

posted by star4sky5 on January 21, 2008 at 9:49 PM | link to this | reply

VERY NICELY DONE

and the mind and learning to love yourself is an art

and discovering that being content with self

posted by star4sky5 on January 21, 2008 at 9:49 PM | link to this | reply

wow
so true and so down to the point--- i really like this one... its got heart and soul wrapped up in easy to read writing! kudos! and thanks for the comment also:) 

posted by TheWifey on January 21, 2008 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

posted by BC-A on January 21, 2008 at 6:35 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by leaderspeaker on January 21, 2008 at 5:50 PM | link to this | reply

 thats whats up! Nice.

posted by lestate7 on January 21, 2008 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

i meant "VALID POINTS"-pints of ale or beer would be inappropriate for Dr K

http://negroartist.com/Martin%27s%20big%20words%20the%20life%20of%20Dr.%20Martin%20Luther%20King,%20Jr..jpg

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on January 21, 2008 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

Valid pints form a caring American! No easy answers-but ACTION is needed,
do good works....and soon just as addding clean water to a muddy glass of water....will clean it even if we do not throw away all the dirty water at the start of our actions. Good karma, my brother. Thanks for a good and timely offering. Shalom

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on January 21, 2008 at 4:50 PM | link to this | reply


posted by Soul_Builder101 on January 21, 2008 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

Perfect! Why we do not invest in rebuilding our country is beyond me. The horror you describe needs immediate attention. So many go down for so few to have their $. The most devastating is the great minds that are left in the mire of human indifference. It is good that this had been put out there but there is so much that needs to be done. If we put this in our prayers perhaps they will be answered by putting the best candidate in office.  sam

posted by sam444 on January 21, 2008 at 4:12 PM | link to this | reply

QG, I call this growth..great job my young & wise friend ! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on January 21, 2008 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

WOW
I can tell your really passionate about this and I feel the same way eventhough im 19, I love the way you've tyed it together too Well done :)

posted by Shanlizer88 on January 21, 2008 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply