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Excellent!
posted by
BC-A
on January 24, 2008 at 8:37 PM
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stbond
cool song - wish I could hear you sing it!
posted by
Troosha
on January 24, 2008 at 1:57 PM
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very beautiful
posted by
quietguy7
on January 24, 2008 at 11:36 AM
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Good poetry!!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 24, 2008 at 11:28 AM
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Re: Sarah, this is so good...acoustic or electric????
Hi teddypoet. I'll hash out the melody, which I have in my head right now, on acoustic. Then it could go either way.
posted by
stbond
on January 24, 2008 at 11:05 AM
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This is a beautifully orchestrated poem. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 24, 2008 at 11:04 AM
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Sarah, this is so good...acoustic or electric????
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 24, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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