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Yes it is, thank you.
posted by
robertwest
on January 28, 2008 at 1:34 PM
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That's poetry of love and admiration.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on January 28, 2008 at 8:56 AM
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Re: A beautiful poem .. well said.
thank you
posted by
robertwest
on January 27, 2008 at 11:28 AM
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Re: Wow!
It really comes from my heart.
posted by
robertwest
on January 27, 2008 at 11:28 AM
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Re: So true
You are very welcome.
posted by
robertwest
on January 27, 2008 at 11:26 AM
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A beautiful poem .. well said.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on January 26, 2008 at 6:43 PM
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Wow!
You really get into it.
posted by
BC-A
on January 26, 2008 at 6:14 PM
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So true
I particularly enjoyed the vivid imagery. I think it was great how you included so much in one short poem, I think if I gave a crack at it it would be several pages haha. You surely did a better job than I could have. Thanks for sharing!
posted by
Resilience
on January 26, 2008 at 11:37 AM
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Re:
thanks for you nice review
posted by
robertwest
on January 26, 2008 at 11:10 AM
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Re: Wonderful..I too love the ocean..
awe my my, she is a woman, some even think she is the giver of all life..... the beginning of life as we know it. I myself came from the dirt maybe thats why I love her so much.... anyways thanks for the comment.
posted by
robertwest
on January 26, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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Wonderful..I too love the ocean..
never really thought of it as a female..nice thought :) ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 26, 2008 at 10:57 AM
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GREAT! The cadence and the rhyme made for a frolicking fun time at the ocean. Just very well written and fantastic organization. I like the wrapping up with the beginning line, sort of a tidal effect. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 26, 2008 at 10:56 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on January 26, 2008 at 10:53 AM
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robertwest
on January 26, 2008 at 10:45 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on January 26, 2008 at 10:43 AM
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Re: Nice!
Thank you
posted by
robertwest
on January 26, 2008 at 10:18 AM
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Nice!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on January 26, 2008 at 10:17 AM
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