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And you will... find yourself, that is.  I always cringe when I hear the sounds of sirens.  I imagine the worst, wonder what lives have been changed in a single moment, and my heart goes out to them.  So... my husband decided one day to tell me that the sirens are because an emergency vehicle is rushing some kid's homework to him which he forgot at home.  Now when we hear a siren we both tend to say "those darn kids". 

posted by Troosha on January 29, 2008 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply

I can relate
I can really relate to how you feel about sirens. where i live we hear them 3-4 times a day minimum. and you can't help but pray for those in need you can't ignore the sirens. Good Write I enjoyed I I was able to relate to it on other levels as well

posted by WallaceK on January 29, 2008 at 5:34 AM | link to this | reply

I have written about the war within & without; Islam spoke of JIHAD in&out
--- some are great on the outside and dangerous withing/alone with their thoughts. You are the gentle one who "feel" for others. Shalom and Success, Brother!

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on January 29, 2008 at 3:45 AM | link to this | reply

I pray when I hear sirens, too!
It's amazing what God can do.
About your depression: have you tried medication? 
I pray the lord will put his healing hand on you now and heal you from head to toe.

posted by QuailNest on January 29, 2008 at 12:25 AM | link to this | reply

I do the same thing when I hear the sirens.
A rose and a smile and another From me and Bo =^. .^= the wonder dog!

posted by Whacky on January 28, 2008 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

Nicely Said

I love the imagery of the softy, trying to break through the "tough guy" shell.

posted by Sira890 on January 28, 2008 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply

quietguy,
Interesting writing. Thanks for sharing!

posted by SpitFire70 on January 28, 2008 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

Hey QG, it's so cool....
Here I want you to ask your doc about : use of prednisone for you, also TRIAMCINOLONE cream.....I will give you another name of a bleach too.....( I guess it's aclara......some like that)...

posted by star4sky5 on January 28, 2008 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

quietguy
tears make me weak

posted by Lanetay on January 28, 2008 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

Another good one!
Love what you write!

posted by CRShelley on January 28, 2008 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on January 28, 2008 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on January 28, 2008 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

There is no being humble to evil. Either you fight and kick their xxsses or they kick yours!!!!!!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on January 28, 2008 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply

I do the same thing! Very cool post!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on January 28, 2008 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

hi, QG. refreshing poem have a nice day/night

posted by wana_phils on January 28, 2008 at 3:40 PM | link to this | reply