Go to Everyman's
- Add a comment
- Go to Where All The Flowers Have Gone?
Where all the flowers heve gone?
It's long sure! Boring? Never! I enjoy reading your poem and thus far could not found any boring stuff! It's actually so beautiful, I was disapointed when it ended! Keep up the good work!
posted by
Oosthuizen
on February 2, 2008 at 1:30 AM
| link to this | reply
I heard the lyrics of some favorite songs too. Not boring...yet Bro. SHALOM
http://robertmccaw.com/galleries/plantlife/trees/beech-american/images/Beech-American-Winter-8-2.jpg
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on February 1, 2008 at 8:08 PM
| link to this | reply
It was kinda longish, repetitive scenarios..... but it was worth the read!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 1, 2008 at 2:42 PM
| link to this | reply
Hello Kayzzaman--I was actually going to right something very similar to
what Sam has said!So I will not 'repeat' it. You appear to think so
Little of your writings! None of us are here to 'judge' your work-we read and comment-(mostly)-because we/I CHOOSE to and why do I CHOOSE to? Simply because I ENJOY reading you! No one forces me to-and-if I was bored--then I simply would not bother to pop in!! Hope you get my meaning and it is meant in the nicest possible way! God bless-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 1, 2008 at 1:32 PM
| link to this | reply
Beautiful and well written !
posted by
afzal50
on February 1, 2008 at 9:12 AM
| link to this | reply
Kaz, please refine the intro, you are not boring as usual. You have great depth and emotion based in thought, well structured stanzas that followed the theme and reinforced it through well planned and conceived imagery. Although this is long it is a keeper. This is a poem that can be read many, many times and the mood will reflect the meaning for the reader in wonderful ways. it is a healing, insightful poem. I can't qualify this as boring as usual. Please keep on the path of your soul as you write, I sense wonderful poetry about to emerge! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 1, 2008 at 9:09 AM
| link to this | reply
Well right now all our flowers are buried under the snow and ice...Thanks for the poem, I really enjoyed this little walk through time...I want the flowers back~I want to see the sun~
posted by
Offy
on February 1, 2008 at 9:08 AM
| link to this | reply
This actually brought back a lot of memories
posted by
pen_dragon
on February 1, 2008 at 8:01 AM
| link to this | reply