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This is deep!!!!!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 13, 2008 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

Most excellent. I also enjoy it when a fine piece of work comes together as though one had been working on it for weeks. sam

posted by sam444 on February 13, 2008 at 8:21 AM | link to this | reply

The last stanza is outstandingly tremendous
The other are beautiful as well.  Amazing.

posted by ChrisJames on February 13, 2008 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

Superb poem indeed !

posted by afzal50 on February 13, 2008 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply

An excellent piece!
very well done; great content; thank you

posted by mariaki on February 13, 2008 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

wowzer....it IS very beautiful...worth rereading!

*raven*

posted by polarcontradict on February 13, 2008 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply