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white heat in a sweet fist of crying.  that's and incredible line!  thank you!

posted by bluebossa on February 16, 2008 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

I see the effects of translating!! It gives a uniqueness to your expressions!!!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 15, 2008 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

So much in this poem that it difficult to sort it all immediately. Excellent insight!  sam

posted by sam444 on February 15, 2008 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

Profound !

posted by afzal50 on February 15, 2008 at 5:27 AM | link to this | reply