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How are you
A beautiful piece of work
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 16, 2008 at 7:26 PM
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Lovely. . .
posted by
stbond
on February 16, 2008 at 5:58 PM
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Thank you, sam. I so want to be with her.
posted by
cpklapper
on February 16, 2008 at 1:03 PM
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Re: cpklapper
Thank you, Troosha. I write, I have to write, from the heart.
posted by
cpklapper
on February 16, 2008 at 12:57 PM
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Re: you couldnt be this sexy and sublime dear cpklapper...........
Thank you, Jenn. I couldn't be that without my sweet honey B.
posted by
cpklapper
on February 16, 2008 at 12:52 PM
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Re: Hey, I like sex and communication as much as you seem to do
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem, jfm32. Of course, you are granted a voyeuristic glance into my love life, such as it is, much like that old Everly Brothers song, because you may recognize and appreciate how much lovemaking there is in a dream.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on February 16, 2008 at 12:46 PM
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Make those dreams come true, my friend! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 16, 2008 at 10:48 AM
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cpklapper
And breathe your sweetness as my air..... such tenderness and love in these words as well as the entire poem!
posted by
Troosha
on February 16, 2008 at 10:36 AM
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you couldnt be this sexy and sublime dear cpklapper...........
actually dear Carl...Extremely expressive!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on February 16, 2008 at 10:21 AM
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Hey, I like sex and communication as much as you seem to do
But this a little much--mais no? Now, do you want to feel or do you want to think (and perhaps relect) why the world should genuflect around your idea. Now do you want to open my eyes, or shut them??
This is the only question I'm left with, because I have no idea (that you have given me) why you took up this pen.
posted by
jfm32
on February 16, 2008 at 9:43 AM
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