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What images! I liked the quick rythm and the desperation inside!
posted by
chiq
on March 3, 2008 at 3:36 AM
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Wow! what a ride.
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 28, 2008 at 9:39 PM
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How are you
Take me there what a journey
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 26, 2008 at 2:49 PM
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I love this one!
posted by
KaBooM62
on February 25, 2008 at 5:19 PM
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Shailey, somehow the last lines are always worth it- His love never fails
no matter how Satanic the temptations and delusions. If we only open eyes, hearts and mouths to ask, "Save Me." Shalom
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on February 24, 2008 at 6:15 PM
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A visit to hell, or to our innermost chambers perhaps, very reflective poem, I liked it, It has a great flow and the imagery is powerful and seductive.
posted by
Sinome
on February 23, 2008 at 7:57 PM
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Profound symbolism. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
ger_musser
on February 23, 2008 at 3:57 PM
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Oh, wow. deep, spiritual, and absolutely awesome, love!
posted by
BC-A
on February 23, 2008 at 3:32 PM
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wow
posted by
star4sky5
on February 23, 2008 at 3:02 PM
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Your words weave mystery and depth ~ the end, by the Kiss seemingly pardons any sorrow. Intense, poignant poem. Bravo! ~Ely
posted by
elysianfields
on February 22, 2008 at 6:08 AM
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posted by
tyleness
on February 21, 2008 at 12:27 PM
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Powerful work, Bluehands
Thank you for sharing.
posted by
Katray2
on February 21, 2008 at 8:02 AM
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posted by
soulspeaker
on February 21, 2008 at 4:41 AM
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intense feelings in an intense piece dear bluehand........
i like the flow and the deep senses of your piece sweetheart...great job!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on February 20, 2008 at 10:27 PM
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