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amazing
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 21, 2008 at 8:59 PM
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this has a stream-of-consciousness feel to it.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on February 21, 2008 at 1:18 PM
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Awake and most vigilant. Most excellent poem with imagery of scrutiny! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 21, 2008 at 12:35 PM
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Beautiful
Both in body and in mind...keep going
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on February 21, 2008 at 11:59 AM
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Purple
You bettcha, that's me. Sleeping away my days, living in dream land hoping to wake someday and I will be okay and no longer afraid, no longer confused. It's hard to keep my eyes open for I am always in hiding, especially from my self.
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on February 21, 2008 at 11:43 AM
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Don't blame me, I worked till 12:15 last night, so I like to sleep late,
don't be so tough on me....HAHAHA
posted by
star4sky5
on February 21, 2008 at 8:48 AM
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Mermaid
I am envious of your ability with words.
posted by
Yeshuan
on February 21, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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Walk aware and awake...
I came. I read. I understood. I left, desiring more.
joab
posted by
joab1
on February 21, 2008 at 6:08 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on February 21, 2008 at 4:17 AM
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My dear Mermaid
fear is our worst enemy and should be faced head on with eyes wide open; this is excellent; thank you beautiful heart & God bless
posted by
mariaki
on February 21, 2008 at 4:12 AM
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