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wonderful!
composition as a work of art here ~ I like this style. ~Ely
posted by
elysianfields
on February 22, 2008 at 6:04 AM
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Good one, NightMajik
How wonderful that last little bit of time with each other before beginning the rush of the day.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 22, 2008 at 4:29 AM
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I liked the simplicity of the lines and the complicated meanings, specially " my heart and your music, hey, just listen, a composition, not conversation, translating," Well done ;-)
posted by
Sinome
on February 21, 2008 at 10:22 PM
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In all the crispness of this poem I was drawn to the allure of the perfect situation. sam
posted by
sam444
on February 21, 2008 at 9:46 AM
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Night
Bravo! I especially liked the closing stanza....
posted by
Troosha
on February 21, 2008 at 9:20 AM
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posted by
tyleness
on February 21, 2008 at 7:39 AM
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A nice peice. Thanks for sharing your dreams.
posted by
Trene
on February 21, 2008 at 6:30 AM
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nightmajik..........
dreams...may not be as vivid but it's ours to fonder our thoughts...good one...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on February 21, 2008 at 4:54 AM
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posted by
mariaki
on February 21, 2008 at 4:15 AM
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Very nice. (...a composition not conversation) Great!
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 21, 2008 at 4:09 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on February 21, 2008 at 4:06 AM
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