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You have powerful words. I was riveted. Thank -you.
posted by
Kobriel
on March 18, 2008 at 2:26 PM
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...wow
posted by
star4sky5
on February 27, 2008 at 10:10 AM
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Beautiful
I loved it so so graceful Well done! thanks for stopping by!
posted by
Shanlizer88
on February 27, 2008 at 3:43 AM
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Beautifully written poem. I'll watch for more!
posted by
ger_musser
on February 25, 2008 at 7:10 AM
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Wow....
such power of evocation is contained in those lines... heartache and beauty both.
Superb writing 
posted by
lionreign
on February 25, 2008 at 3:48 AM
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Powerful poem, so dark, so well written. It made me very sad, sad for I know that those scars weigh a lot, there is so much pain behind the lines, I am sorry you had to feel it, wether it was real in your life or an empathetic experience. Either way it must have taken a lot out of you, and writing about it is good for you. Be strong Tylen, It will be OK. :-)
posted by
Sinome
on February 23, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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behind your brain, Ic stood like a shadow, you saw my lost life, screaming
to the world........
i don't know you know me, but somewhere in your words, I live like a dead one.......
posted by
star4sky5
on February 23, 2008 at 7:33 PM
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Relationships are sensitive. Can this be likened to The Beatitudes?
posted by
ger_musser
on February 23, 2008 at 10:36 AM
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Exquisite imagery! The emphasis lines were well placed. The conflicts were very reflective of the tragedy that can occur in a relationship! I felt this to be an outstanding poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 23, 2008 at 6:11 AM
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BEAUTIFUL AN 8 DENIFINATLEY
come visit me!
posted by
Shanlizer88
on February 23, 2008 at 2:47 AM
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The world of love charged with reality! Excellent write!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 22, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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Thank you for leaving a comment to my blog entry
Damn Damn Damn this hit home
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 22, 2008 at 3:20 PM
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