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Sensuous; sensual. I like this one very well.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on February 23, 2008 at 7:18 PM
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yes, there's a world of unknown in deep
posted by
star4sky5
on February 23, 2008 at 2:23 PM
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Thank you for leaving a comment to my blog entry
this post takes me to wonderful place
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 23, 2008 at 2:16 PM
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Freud would agree...
but, your inner world would blow his mind. As it does mine!
posted by
metalrat
on February 23, 2008 at 10:04 AM
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Oh! how the protoplasm is riddled with needs and dreams! Is it real or is it another blinding illusion? These thoughts hit me as I read this poem! But then, I am 'old school', as younger folks assume!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 23, 2008 at 9:46 AM
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I want to come sit with you! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 23, 2008 at 9:28 AM
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Ohh..soo sensual..knocked me right off my feet :) - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 23, 2008 at 9:04 AM
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Mermaid, I'm getting caught up on some reading you have indeed created
something beautifully sensual..


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posted by
Rumor
on February 23, 2008 at 7:27 AM
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Physical Intimacy
is one of God's greatest gifts to us. You have expressed this beautifully, passionately, and I thank you for this wonderful work of art!
posted by
Yeshuan
on February 23, 2008 at 6:03 AM
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Show me the world of the unknown...
And my own soul adds: that I may -- if only once -- have certainty of the "moment".
Beautiful and transcendent.
joab
posted by
joab1
on February 23, 2008 at 5:55 AM
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Sensual and palpable passion ~ Nice!! ~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 23, 2008 at 5:25 AM
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beautiful
posted by
Loribeth215
on February 23, 2008 at 3:31 AM
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Absulotley Enchanting
You had me intrigued all the way mermaid. You know what mermaids do? They swim down to the very very bottom of the ocean and collect pearls of wisdom. Says allot :)
Visit me anytime
posted by
Shanlizer88
on February 23, 2008 at 2:58 AM
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Mermaid, outstanding!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 23, 2008 at 12:54 AM
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So beautiful Mermaid, so sensual, Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on February 23, 2008 at 12:15 AM
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