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Sensuous; sensual. I like this one very well.

posted by EX_TURPI on February 23, 2008 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

yes, there's a world of unknown in deep

posted by star4sky5 on February 23, 2008 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you for leaving a comment to my blog entry
this post takes me to wonderful place

posted by Thomas_Cornish on February 23, 2008 at 2:16 PM | link to this | reply

Freud would agree...
but, your inner world would blow his mind. As it does mine!

posted by metalrat on February 23, 2008 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

Oh! how the protoplasm is riddled with needs and dreams! Is it real or is it another blinding illusion? These thoughts hit me as I read this poem! But then, I am 'old school', as younger folks assume!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 23, 2008 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

I want to come sit with you!  sam

posted by sam444 on February 23, 2008 at 9:28 AM | link to this | reply

Ohh..soo sensual..knocked me right off my feet :) - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on February 23, 2008 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply

Mermaid, I'm getting caught up on some reading you have indeed created
something beautifully sensual.......

posted by Rumor on February 23, 2008 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

Physical Intimacy
is one of God's greatest gifts to us.  You have expressed this beautifully, passionately, and I thank you for this wonderful work of art!

posted by Yeshuan on February 23, 2008 at 6:03 AM | link to this | reply

Show me the world of the unknown...
And my own soul adds: that I may -- if only once -- have certainty of the "moment".  Beautiful and transcendent.    joab

posted by joab1 on February 23, 2008 at 5:55 AM | link to this | reply

 Sensual and palpable passion ~ Nice!! ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on February 23, 2008 at 5:25 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by Loribeth215 on February 23, 2008 at 3:31 AM | link to this | reply

Absulotley Enchanting

You had me intrigued all the way mermaid. You know what mermaids do? They swim down to the very very bottom of the ocean and collect pearls of wisdom. Says allot :)

Visit me anytime

posted by Shanlizer88 on February 23, 2008 at 2:58 AM | link to this | reply

Mermaid, outstanding!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on February 23, 2008 at 12:54 AM | link to this | reply

 So beautiful Mermaid, so sensual, Bravo!

posted by Sinome on February 23, 2008 at 12:15 AM | link to this | reply