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Purple
You amaze me. Your words have echoed my life in sooo many posts. Are spirits are surely linked
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on February 27, 2008 at 11:16 AM
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Oh PurpleM
Our dear Mermaid's song is hearteningly pathetic, probably one that made you what you are - a sweetie.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 27, 2008 at 2:04 AM
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Oh sweetie, I can only hope you are using your poetic licence and empathetically writing about someone else;s experience. I pray that is the case because the idea that such a beautiful soul as yours should have gone through such a horrible experience,,,is unimaginable. and yet, like Writerspirit said, if you have gone through that, it has not mar you in any way, you have become such an amazing person, it speaks volumes about who you are and about the generosity of your heart.
posted by
Sinome
on February 26, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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This one
leaves me motionless, even still you have become such a beautiful person!!!
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 26, 2008 at 5:59 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 26, 2008 at 4:16 PM
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Sorry that the best I can give are icons.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on February 26, 2008 at 4:11 PM
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Wonderful Purple
I lack the words to describe how this powerful poem has made me feel!
posted by
Yeshuan
on February 26, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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that sort of trauma, you experienced is so deep, that leaves me speechless
posted by
AlienFemale
on February 26, 2008 at 2:02 PM
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What a beautiful person you are, heart and soul in addition to physical beauty. You are an overcomer. No one can take away your spirit.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 26, 2008 at 12:34 PM
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Mermaid...I share your grief...Bro Soulbuilder's reaction pretty much...
reflects mine..don't ever let this happen again to you / friends..always know that God is within & around to protect you..you simply have to pray & ask for help..bless, Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 26, 2008 at 11:28 AM
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Predator SOBs! Thats how they plot! Forgiveness? No way God will ever do that. On top of that I would have cursed them. Justice is the only deterrent! Sorry!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 26, 2008 at 8:37 AM
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God bless you ~
This reading, Poet, hit me in the pit of my stomach. Such visions so potent and the old saying comes to mind, "what doesnt kill us makes us stronger" ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 26, 2008 at 6:54 AM
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enthralling
enchanting and poignant. Beautifully written
posted by
lionreign
on February 26, 2008 at 6:23 AM
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lots of hugs and positive thoughts from me to you...take care :)
posted by
Sincerity_Anna
on February 26, 2008 at 5:40 AM
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mariaki and afzal thank you so much! will read you both tomorrow dear...
thank you mariaki dear for wishing me well....welcome back dear afzal...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on February 26, 2008 at 4:43 AM
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Darling mermaid............
I have just read your comment and see you are not feeling very well; I am sorry to hear that and am sending you my prayers and blessings for a speedy recovery; take good care of you my friend
posted by
mariaki
on February 26, 2008 at 3:35 AM
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An often told tale of war and who also suffers the consequences...
excellently told and the imagery is frighteningly real! Thank you my dear mermaid and many blessings
posted by
mariaki
on February 26, 2008 at 3:27 AM
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Beautiful and well written ! I am back my dear !
posted by
afzal50
on February 26, 2008 at 1:10 AM
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