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Awesome...this leaves me speechless. Awesome.
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 1, 2008 at 8:48 PM
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so well said
posted by
star4sky5
on February 28, 2008 at 3:59 PM
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You are not getting older but rather better. I like the imagery most assuredly! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 28, 2008 at 11:14 AM
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Stunning~ drew me in by the first line ~ breathless by the ending and now, marked to favorites...Stunning, provocative and so creative.
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 28, 2008 at 8:34 AM
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" I wouldn't exactly call this a poem about growing older..." -- well, if you did, it would be a poem about growing older --gracefully. Very beautiful! Thank you for sharing.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 28, 2008 at 6:09 AM
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Vivid imagery!
posted by
Straightforward
on February 28, 2008 at 5:54 AM
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This is definately poetry, it sparks thoughts & emotions and can mean many different things. Great work.
posted by
Trene
on February 28, 2008 at 4:52 AM
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