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quietguy
sad I am sure my kids feel about the same
posted by
Lanetay
on March 2, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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Wow this one has left me speechless
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 2, 2008 at 12:16 AM
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Great poem but so angry sweetie, its almost like a rap, actually it would make a good rap, and I do not say that in a bad way but as a compliment, I believe that some of the nicest poetry of our times is in those raps. Thank you for sharing :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 1, 2008 at 5:33 PM
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Very well done quietguy! It Needed to be said/written and I hope you feel a
little 'lighter' for doing so? Great-it takes a real person-with a true Heart-to be able to
forgive.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 1, 2008 at 1:15 PM
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At least you got some help from him!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 1, 2008 at 10:48 AM
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Forgiveness is so important, I applaud you and your lament is most expressive. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 1, 2008 at 10:33 AM
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Passionate and heartfelt !
posted by
afzal50
on March 1, 2008 at 4:39 AM
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quietguy ~
"i forgive you for the things you did and did not do..." --this is always necessary to begin the healing process. God bless you.
~ SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 1, 2008 at 2:48 AM
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