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Sit this one out and surely you'll miss the next dance.

 wow!

posted by star4sky5 on March 4, 2008 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting poetry
and lovly...good work, keep writing!

posted by Katherine_Ann on March 4, 2008 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

 Under, between and above...succinct!  This is great ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 4, 2008 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

 down and out, but among great lines.

posted by BC-A on March 3, 2008 at 11:36 PM | link to this | reply