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Thank you all...
for the great comments.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 5, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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posted by
Samantha39
on March 5, 2008 at 7:51 PM
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I love your allusions to the past...vivid and wonderfully easy to envision. Thanks for shariang.
Ger
posted by
ger_musser
on March 5, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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I absolutely loved this sweet, wonderful poem, Bravo! It is just flawless and perfect, in content it could not be sweeter and in meaning, well lets just say it lifted my spirits ( and tonight, that was not an easy task :-)) Your words have a touch of magic that combined with your immense talent make your readers fly :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 5, 2008 at 6:37 PM
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Good read!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 5, 2008 at 4:44 PM
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Thank you all...
for stopping by and leaving such great comments!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 5, 2008 at 11:37 AM
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wigopa
I wanna dream like
you dream.....
posted by
Troosha
on March 5, 2008 at 11:35 AM
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The last stanza was most profound. I was basking in the thoughts of your mind when suddenly I was pleasantly redirected. Well written poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 5, 2008 at 7:01 AM
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This one is filled with hope- for all of us.
posted by
Original_Influence
on March 5, 2008 at 5:42 AM
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Great work
I really enjoyed this and resonate with it, from the fantasy images to a waiting love. Wonderful work.
posted by
NightMajik
on March 5, 2008 at 5:26 AM
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Wonderful!
...to dream of a land where there are unicorns -- my favorite mythical creature. Magical -- and well-written. Thank you for sharing. 
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 5, 2008 at 4:40 AM
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Love is all about dreams and desires .
posted by
afzal50
on March 5, 2008 at 4:00 AM
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You have vivid dreams...such wonderful rich dreams. I don't dream as much, but when I do I know its not as grand as yours...~Lovely...potent and rich
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 4, 2008 at 11:06 PM
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