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So beautiful ~ so romantic - precise!
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 5, 2008 at 10:49 PM
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Nice fluent poem!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 5, 2008 at 4:16 PM
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Night
love sinks
in the place between
hands and soul 
Loved this stanza
posted by
Troosha
on March 5, 2008 at 3:19 PM
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Love the cadence and imagery. Very well written.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 5, 2008 at 11:19 AM
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nicely written, nice imagery and flow
posted by
poetwoman
on March 5, 2008 at 10:49 AM
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The imagery was swimmingly grand! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 5, 2008 at 8:18 AM
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That poem flows like the ripples in the water........
posted by
majesticvisions
on March 5, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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very pretty
posted by
star4sky5
on March 5, 2008 at 6:52 AM
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NightMajik ~
I really enjoyed this piece -- smooth and lulling, like the ocean's calm. Very nice! Thank you for sharing.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 5, 2008 at 6:43 AM
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I love the phrasing in this my friend
good job; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on March 5, 2008 at 5:42 AM
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