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What a heartfelt poem deep and stunning if we don't become common al invain
Can I share a post TEARS BLINDING MY SIGHT page 3 poem 2 i'll continue to read thank you.
posted by
Mystereo
on February 10, 2009 at 5:12 PM
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Whether literal or metaphorical...
...war is hell on nature, as well as our natures......in love and war. Great poem, Sinome!
posted by
metalrat
on March 8, 2008 at 12:51 PM
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posted by
star4sky5
on March 8, 2008 at 10:25 AM
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Sinome
posted by
Troosha
on March 8, 2008 at 10:23 AM
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A profound poem. Thank you for sharing these very heartfelt words.
Ger
posted by
ger_musser
on March 8, 2008 at 8:44 AM
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Wonderful illustration, Sinome...very well-orchestrated indeed!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 8, 2008 at 8:16 AM
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It has my son, and it is not pleasant on any front! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 8, 2008 at 4:06 AM
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Sinome-I can't begin to know what you're feeling-I only know that this poem
is Beautifull and extremely Personal-to you! Thank you for sharing .Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 8, 2008 at 3:48 AM
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beautiful poem as always from you and great message
posted by
quietguy7
on March 8, 2008 at 3:10 AM
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Hello Sinome
The imagery is simply awesome although pictured in pithiness. I can see some pain, personal, but also a felt experience of many. You have a way with your poetry to take aboard anyone willing to come along, particularly, in this case I think, down memory lane. I could be wrong. Keep writing and God bless~ my friend.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 7, 2008 at 11:40 PM
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This piece is powerful and blows my away wow!!!
After reading the comment you left to my blog today. I have to say you have inspired a new saying or piece from me. I'll put it up later today. I am one reader you can count on not loosing.
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 7, 2008 at 11:22 PM
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your intensity is felt my dear sinome.......
and yes very sensitive...your depth my love is so sensible...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 7, 2008 at 10:09 PM
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Believe it or not!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 7, 2008 at 9:32 PM
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Oh of innocence - this touches me Poetess. Very deep - strikes passionately from your tender heart.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 7, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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I felt the pain of private battles mostly lost within myself
the imagery here is very thought provoking.
posted by
Kabu
on March 7, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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Modern Times
An insightful poem on the issue of war that's visionary. That is, your poem's both melancholic and beautiful, love.
posted by
BC-A
on March 7, 2008 at 7:26 PM
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You poetry rings true
However sad a physical war seems to be
the war in mind is much worse, you see
suffering is not "out there"
it is here we need to bear:
the brunt of ideas
feelings
the stormy sea
from which we cannot flee
Only one escape
Accept what is
And Love without End
You are God sent
posted by
AardigeAfrikaner
on March 7, 2008 at 5:09 PM
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