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That's somehow 'tender' and beautifull Kayzzaman! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 8, 2008 at 4:03 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by quietguy7 on March 8, 2008 at 2:44 AM | link to this | reply

On the Path of Salvation

posted by Oosthuizen on March 7, 2008 at 10:46 PM | link to this | reply

close to rapture...this poem is palpable emotion and so poignant ~ on the threshold,  --- thank You dear Poet. ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 7, 2008 at 10:18 PM | link to this | reply

wow, very reflective poem.  Loved the images and tone,  profound :-)

posted by Sinome on March 7, 2008 at 10:17 PM | link to this | reply

poignant dear kayzzaman!

  these are very well written!

Your bold step will never be shaken on the threshold
Into the throbbing voice of humanity you cry.

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 7, 2008 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply

Great stuff kayz!!!!!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 7, 2008 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply