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That's somehow 'tender' and beautifull Kayzzaman! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 8, 2008 at 4:03 AM
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beautiful
posted by
quietguy7
on March 8, 2008 at 2:44 AM
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On the Path of Salvation
posted by
Oosthuizen
on March 7, 2008 at 10:46 PM
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close to rapture...this poem is palpable emotion and so poignant ~ on the threshold, --- thank You dear Poet. ~

Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 7, 2008 at 10:18 PM
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wow, very reflective poem. Loved the images and tone, profound :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 7, 2008 at 10:17 PM
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poignant dear kayzzaman!
these are very well written!

Your bold step will never be shaken on the threshold
Into the throbbing voice of humanity you cry.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 7, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Great stuff kayz!!!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 7, 2008 at 10:12 PM
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