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Not bad at all.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on March 10, 2008 at 5:59 AM
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Great work...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 9, 2008 at 11:24 PM
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Well Done
I liked the cadence and the imagery. The flow and metaphors worked well to. Very well done. Thank you for sharing.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 9, 2008 at 11:20 PM
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