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Is it the fever of writing?
posted by
adventurer02
on November 1, 2015 at 1:37 AM
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Superbly done, Mermaid!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 17, 2008 at 12:23 AM
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Intense, Mermaid...
posted by
saul_relative
on March 13, 2008 at 2:50 PM
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such feeling, hope you feel better
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 13, 2008 at 2:42 PM
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I know
I am right here if you need a shoulder...keep writing
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on March 13, 2008 at 1:05 PM
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Thus the circle continues. I don't know why you are not feeling well, but if it is a heartbreak, it is their loss. You are one of the most incredible people I have come to know and let nothing stop you from complete happiness. How's my boy doing? sam
posted by
sam444
on March 13, 2008 at 12:21 PM
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Watch that fever!!!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 13, 2008 at 9:50 AM
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Purple
This is stunning! You glide your reader from disappointment, to hopefulness, to excitement, and then back to disappointment. It's a journey many of us have been on.
posted by
Troosha
on March 13, 2008 at 7:45 AM
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Hey this poem sort of makes me ponder about our brushes with nature
posted by
Straightforward
on March 13, 2008 at 7:18 AM
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Purple_Mermaid, you put so much of yourself and your emotions into your poems.
The robust morning birds are here outside my window feverishly singing and letting me know that it is time to start the day.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 13, 2008 at 4:08 AM
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WOW such a pouring of heart rendition my friend!
I adore this; you are truly gifted dear heart; thank you; peace and blessings always
posted by
mariaki
on March 13, 2008 at 3:28 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on March 12, 2008 at 9:38 PM
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Lovely poem Mermaid, very sensual, very you :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 12, 2008 at 9:02 PM
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Purple ~ Sending you Love ~ this, your poem made me feel a lot of emotions - touching ~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 12, 2008 at 8:50 PM
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Mermaid
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Delivered to my whitest dove Purple
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 12, 2008 at 8:26 PM
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Mermaid...
This is sooo full of emotion..the kind that comes from a genuine lover's heart.... I'm speechless..great job indeed ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 12, 2008 at 8:15 PM
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Made my heart..
tighten reminding me of love lost. Absolutly perfect in structure and form. Like a trail of memory. Well done indeed.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 12, 2008 at 7:55 PM
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